This is definitely a well done animation. The colors are nice and vibrant, and your OC looks so very kewl, and so very anime! lolz It's simple and sweet and to the point, and just plain adorable! I love the ninja star as well! I know that the ninja style works well for ya! :3 I'm not much of a criticizer, and this IS my first critique, so the only thing I could really maybe say is..umm..I dunno. Maybe the blinking is too much. I dunno
Anywho, to the point: It's so very lovely though, just keep on practicing!
All I have to say is...Wow I mean I wouldn't rate it all stars. But what the hell! I'm surprised on this flash. The handwriting is very smooth, the lineart is smooth, and the coloring fits perfectfully. I believe this style of Jade looks bit different then your previous style.
I like the "Jade" handwriting and use of animation of the object spinning. Very impressive,I consider this flash a really worth a surprise to me. As your friend, bro, and a local critic (not considering a expert).
I find this flash very delightful. Hit me in surprise reaction. Keep it up sis!
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It's simple and sweet and to the point, and just plain adorable!
I'm not much of a criticizer, and this IS my first critique, so the only thing I could really maybe say is..umm..I dunno. Maybe the blinking is too much. I dunno
Anywho, to the point: It's so very lovely though, just keep on practicing!
I like the "Jade" handwriting and use of animation of the object spinning. Very impressive,I consider this flash a really worth a surprise to me. As your friend, bro, and a local critic (not considering a expert).
I find this flash very delightful. Hit me in surprise reaction. Keep it up sis!
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